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THANK YOU FOR THE IDEA, LOVE!

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snarkyVansnarkson's avatar
Quite arousing, but it needs some serious editing work. Keep your tense consistent. Watch to make sure each sentence has a verb. I suggest you run your writing through a spelling and grammar checker to catch minor mistakes like leaving out the p in public.